- Hallo who is it?
- Tell me your name.
- No.
- Why not?
- Because you are a stranger.
- Ok what you gonna do?
- Watch a scary movie.
- What is your favorite?
- Ehe i don't now.
- You never told me your name.
- Why do you wanna now my name?
- Because i wanna now who i´am looking at.
- What did you say?
- You heard me.
- I´am gonna hang up now.
- You are not gonna hang up your bitch because then I will kill your boyfriend.
- No, what do you want from me?
- I,am gonna ask you a question. Where am I.
- Where are you?.
- I´am gonna give you a hint. I am in the closet.
- aha.
The next day the whole scholl now that steven is dead but they don´t now who killed him and Judith the girl who answered the phone said that he had a scary voise.
Next day three students died so everyone had a free week and at guy named Martin there was a big party and almost every students was going to his party and on that party they will also watch horror movies like the texas chainsaw massacre, halloween, evil dead and hellraiser.
A girl named Shelly went downstairs to get some beers but then the killer came from nowhere and stabed here 15 times and then he killed a boy named John that was in backside of the house because he smokes then the killer comes out of nowhere and takes the knife and cut his throat. Then he killed 5 more that is to intense and disturbing to say. Then Judith and Martin now that the killer is inside so Judith goes to the door but the killer comes in and shot 4 students and shot Judith in the arm then Martin comes in with a knife and sayes suprise Judith i,am the killer to and the other killer is your boyfriend Steven. Judith is really scared and angry so she takes a machete stab them to death. When the police came they needed to figure out what happened and Linda got a ried to the hospital and then they healed here wounds and fix here up so she could go home but on the way home Steven came out from a bush and stabbed Judith to death.
The End
You have written a scary story and used many scary movies as information in the text. The story is a bit short with lots of dialouge, and I am sure if you have written more it would get even more scary. Please take some time to look through your text and correct it. It is easy to notice that you like to write about scary things, maybe it will be your favourite topic to write about in the future.
SvaraRaderaJag är nöjd att den är läskig men inte så nöjd att jag använde så mycket dialouge. Jag ska jobba med att berätta mer istället för dialouger.
SvaraRadera